Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono Is a Good Leader
Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono is a leader (president) in our state. He is a emphatic, always try to make many change in our state and do the best for Indonesia society. Fight corruption, he curve a committee, KPK. And it has been success, because KPK catch many corruptor in Indonesia, minister and many more. He also decrease price of fuel congruent request of Indonesia society. So, many people like with him and his reign in our state. Because he make many change and many policy. And I like with Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono too, because his figure suitable as a leader.
Besides that, Susilo Bambang Yudyono is a care. He always care with Indonesia. Give some of money for poor society in Indonesia. It’s called BLT (bantuan langsung tunai) Although count of money not much, only Rp 30.000,00 but he try to give it for all poor society in Indonesia. And it get many attention from Indonesia society, because it can help of them to supply their need. Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono care with education in Indonesia too. He make a scholarship program for smart student, so it can make a student to more study hard and then can get it. I think it’s a great program to improve of education in Indonesia, And can produce many student whose have high quality of SDM ( sumber daya manusia.
Responsible is character of Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono too. He responsible with his family and this state. Try to be a good father and good grandfather for his son and his grandchild. He educate his son to be a good person, emphatic like him and can responsible for family. And Susilo Bambang Yudhoyono is a good figure for his son. When his grandchild was born, he always care with his grandchild. Try to be a good leader and responsible for this state when this state have many big problem and he try to solving it and make many change for our state better than before.

8 komentar:
Hi.. elok,, thanks for give me a comment,
I think your paragraph is good enough,
You describe about SBY is more spesific and clear..
Pratiwi Ramandita 120810487G
hii elok ..
your paragraph is very interesting ..
you describe about Mr SBY very clear ..
but i found some mistake in your paragraph ..
that's all
give me comment too ..
120810489G
hi i Am RUdy 120810491 G....
i think your paragraph is good enough even you made some mistake on your writing....
be careful on write a vocabulary,,,because it will be misunderstanding if you write on wrong vocab.....
and i HOpe Mr Susilo Baambang Yudoyono Make a President Of In Donesia Amiin....
that's all my comment
Well..
After I read Yours..
I think that is like a description not argumentation..
Coz U just described a lot of things bout SBY,,But U didn't tell about what u like and u dislike...
Beside that U always forget to use 's' and ' es' on singular verbs...
Ok..That's all...
i think your paragraphs are good enough and your writing is focus with your tittle.
i think that's just it my comment.
hay elok
thanks for your comment for my blog before
your writing good enough, i think
and you focus on your writing between its tittle
i think enough my comment for your writing....
kurnia suci (120810488G)
hey Elok..
overall your paragraph is good but you did some mistakes in grammar, like this:
He is a emphatic,
it should be:
He is an emphatic,
Because he make many change and many policy.
it should be:
Because he makes many changes and many policies.
thank you for dropping me comment in my blog :)
DAMASTI A
120810185G
hi elok. . .
i think your paragraph is good enough. .
you describe SBY more specific. .
Rico 120810490 G
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